From our audience feedback, we have discovered what we did well and also what we need to improve on. However overall i believe the feedback was very positive, and we were very happy with some of the comment made.
Firstly we had a lot of positive comments about how artistic and well worked our shots were, for example Emma Smith quoted "Really cool artistic shots" and Sam Rhodes commenting on our "Great cinematography", so this was obviously a strength within our thriller, we also got a few positive comments regarding the effective tension brought up during the sequence for example greg Fellows said that there was a use of "professional sounds building up tension" along with other comments from Charlie Feeney " The sound builds up tension and makes you feel on edge" So from this feedback we have learnt that we use cinematography in a very interesting and artistic way, and also we are good at creating tension through use of sound.
On the other hand when we asked people to describe our plot people found it very hard to see what was happening, for example Bo Jackson thought that it was "Someone being trapped" So this is something we may need to work on, i.e. making shots clearer and maybe using dialogue to make it more understandable.
Another thing we need to work on judging by the comments is quicker editing, as we used slow editing it may of caused the tension to drops in some ways, however in others it creates more tension. For example Seb quoted "quicker editing to create more tension" To an extent i think we could of used a few more quicker shots, but on the other hand i think the long slow shots are the ones that created more tension.
Overall i think that judging by our feedback we can take that we are good at creating tension and use well crafted shots, but maybe we need to use various editing skills to create more tension and make it more exciting.
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